Dear Veronica Roth,
I just want to start off by saying that I am very disappointed
with you. I loved you books, I read the first one, the second one, and now I am
almost done with the third one. I loved everything about your books up until
page 474 of Allegiant. You totally destroyed any respect that I or any other
fan of your books had for you. I am taking a creative writing class and the
main point that my teacher stresses is to make your readers connect to the
characters. You did that very well; when I read I felt as if I was Tris, I was
doing the things she did, I went on the adventures she went on. Then all of a
sudden, BOOM!!!! You just killed the millions of people who also read and
connected to Tris. You just threw the whole point of being an author out the
door. Then stomped on it. Then put it through a paper shredder. Then burned it.
If you were trying to rush into an ending because a deadline was coming up, I assure
you, you did it as badly as possible. I hated Mocking Jay because it
seemed that Collins rushed into an ending. She was in a rush to finish and so
she wrote it as quick as possible. It was terrible. Your book was 10X worse.
Just wanted to let you know.
From,
A disappointed reader

From,
A disappointed reader
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